Sunday, March 15, 2009

I am on a roll or what :-P




Hey guys, I am on a roll with this so called poetry phase LOL. I guess my poetry is somewhat closer to the real meaning of Poetry by now :-D. I know I self proclaim my writing as poetry but that's not why I am posting this.

So the other day I was talking to a friend in Yahoo and he said "BRB 10 mins." . .....As everyone knows an ideal mind is a devils workshop, my ideal mind became a Poets workshop LOL. by the time, he came back , i penned this. And like all my poems, this is also not edited . Straight from the heart. :)

And yeah! I am crazy, impulsive and all crappy hehe.

Again a Dedication to one of my Friends AKA advance Birthday Gift hehe


Did I ever stop to tell you?
How good you make me feel?
How happy you make me?
Its about time honey!!

I never dreamed of befriending
A soul I barely knew
When I was amidst Self destruction
Breaking away from myself!

Your Flirting caused me to smile and
Avoid the turmoil shattering me
Your friendliness gave me a new hope
To explore the horizons never dreamt

Think what you may of me
But trust is what I have in you
Your words are soothing
Your actions are comforting
I rose up to the challenge
When I found a hand to hold on!

It was you my dearest,
Who brought me to the shores,
When I was waddling neck deep
In the hues of Blues!!

I found a friend in you
I found happiness in thy heart
I may not have reciprocated
The love you have shared
But when the clock strikes Panic
I shall float to your support
Lean on me sweetheart
There is nothing to fret
Lets sail on together in bliss!
Amidst the mighty hues of blues!!

5 comments:

  1. It was you my dearest,
    Who brought me to the shores,
    When I was waddling neck deep
    In the hues of Blues!!


    nice! :) it's a cute one, and specially nice as it shows that it's straight from the heart. Somehow it's always better and nice :)

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  2. i LOVED this one... i was smiling towards the end..

    It was you my dearest,
    Who brought me to the shores,
    When I was waddling neck deep
    In the hues of Blues!!

    mwaah >:D< :-*


    PS :: is this poem for rahul? :D...

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  3. i dint see the above post :| .. kinda freaked me out! :|

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  4. Ty apurva

    and anu yeah even if it freaked u out, its for him only~ :-D

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  5. toooooooooooooo good yaar

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